Monday, November 23, 2009

Way Out West: Comments on Chapter Eleven

One of the ideas I had for Sara and Zoey were for them to get mysteriously transported to the old West. There, our heroines would try and blend in, Zoey'd get framed for a murder, and Sara would save her from a lynch mob. Sounds fun, I know, but as a half developed idea, I saw the chance to use it during this serial. Unfortunately, using the whole story would take too long and distract from the main storyline. So, in the end, it's a very abbreviated version, a casual hop into another genre to throw readers off for a little bit. Maybe, someday, I'll have a chance to revisit the idea, but chances are...

Next week, we get back to the story proper, and the origins of the Omnisphere. Probably be a good thing to bring back some antagonists, too. Things get a little boring without some conflict...

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